Small changes after proof-reading of WolframAutomata README.

diff --git a/hacks/WolframAutomata/README.md b/hacks/WolframAutomata/README.md
index 67e7136..91fe6e8 100644 (file)
--- a/hacks/WolframAutomata/README.md
+++ b/hacks/WolframAutomata/README.md
@@ -10,8 +10,9 @@ together, thereby forming a circular universe for the cells to inhabit.  This
 line is drawn horizontally on the screen.
 
 Over time, this line of cells evolves according to rules, with some cells
 line is drawn horizontally on the screen.
 
 Over time, this line of cells evolves according to rules, with some cells

-switching on or off. Each new iteration is drawn below its predecessor, leading
-the screen to scroll vertically over time.
+switching on or off. Each new application of the rule to the universe is drawn
+on the screen as a new line directly below the previous generation's line,
+leading the screen to scroll vertically.

 
 The rules which govern the time evolution of this system depend only on the
 current state of a given cell and the state of its two immediate neighbors.
 
 The rules which govern the time evolution of this system depend only on the
 current state of a given cell and the state of its two immediate neighbors.


@@ -26,11 +27,12 @@ discussed at length in a
 
 ![Rule 110 Animated Screenshot](/screensavers/.git/blob_plain/HEAD:/hacks/WolframAutomata/screenshot_rule_110.gif)
 
 
 ![Rule 110 Animated Screenshot](/screensavers/.git/blob_plain/HEAD:/hacks/WolframAutomata/screenshot_rule_110.gif)
 

-Commandline flags are provided enabling the user to tweak attributes such as
-length and speed of simulation, cell size, rule number, colors, starting seed,
-and other attributes. For example, the screenshot below depicts Rule 73 with
-different colors than the Rule 110 screenshot. Like the Rule 110 screenshot, it
-uses `-cell-size 2` and seeds the simulation with only a single active cell.
+Commandline flags are provided which enable the user to tweak attributes such
+as length and speed of simulation, cell size, rule number, colors, starting
+seed, and other attributes. For example, the screenshot below depicts Rule 73
+with different colors than the Rule 110 screenshot. Like the Rule 110
+screenshot, it uses `-cell-size 2` and seeds the simulation with only a single
+active cell.

 
 ![Rule 73 Animated Screenshot](/screensavers/.git/blob_plain/HEAD:/hacks/WolframAutomata/screenshot_rule_73.gif)
 
 
 ![Rule 73 Animated Screenshot](/screensavers/.git/blob_plain/HEAD:/hacks/WolframAutomata/screenshot_rule_73.gif)
 


@@ -64,9 +66,9 @@ else, edit the `Makefile` to suit your environment per the comments included in
 that file. Note that the `Makefile` assumes a copy of the screenhack library
 source code is located at `../screenhack/` relative to this directory.
 
 that file. Note that the `Makefile` assumes a copy of the screenhack library
 source code is located at `../screenhack/` relative to this directory.
 

-For assistance setting `$(DEFINES)` on non-FreeBSD platforms, consider
-downloading the XScreensaver source tarball, running `./configure` in the
-unpacked directory, and examining the resulting `config.h` file.
+For assistance setting `$(DEFINES)` in the `Makefile` on non-FreeBSD platforms,
+consider downloading the XScreensaver source tarball, running `./configure` in
+the unpacked directory, and examining the resulting `config.h` file.

 
 Although WolframAutomata can integrate with XScreensaver, the presence of
 XScreensaver is not strictly required.  WolframAutomata will both build and
 
 Although WolframAutomata can integrate with XScreensaver, the presence of
 XScreensaver is not strictly required.  WolframAutomata will both build and