comments from O'Reilly and Al Henon

SCCS-vsn: share/man/man0/title.urm 8.11

diff --git a/usr/src/share/man/man0/title.urm b/usr/src/share/man/man0/title.urm
index 5ff6e8c..effe356 100644 (file)
--- a/usr/src/share/man/man0/title.urm
+++ b/usr/src/share/man/man0/title.urm
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
-.\" Copyright (c) 1980, 1993 Regents of the University of California.
+.\" Copyright (c) 1980, 1993, 1994 Regents of the University of California.

 .\" All rights reserved.
 .\"
 .\" %sccs.include.redist.roff%
 .\"
 .\" All rights reserved.
 .\"
 .\" %sccs.include.redist.roff%
 .\"

-.\"    @(#)title.urm   8.10 (Berkeley) %G%
+.\"    @(#)title.urm   8.11 (Berkeley) %G%

 .\"
 .af % i
 .nr LL 6.5i
 .\"
 .af % i
 .nr LL 6.5i


@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ User's Reference Manual
 .nr PS 14
 .nr VS 16.5
 .LP
 .nr PS 14
 .nr VS 16.5
 .LP

-Now in its twentieth your, the USENIX Association,
+Now in its twentieth year, the USENIX Association,

 the UNIX and Advanced Computing Systems professional and technical organization,
 is a not-for-profit membership association of individuals and
 institutions with an interest in UNIX and UNIX-like systems,
 the UNIX and Advanced Computing Systems professional and technical organization,
 is a not-for-profit membership association of individuals and
 institutions with an interest in UNIX and UNIX-like systems,


@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ ISBN: 1-56592-075-9
 .nr VS 26
 .LP
 .ce 1
 .nr VS 26
 .LP
 .ce 1

-\s+4\fBContents\fP\s-4
+\fBContents\fP

 .sp 1
 .nr PS 14
 .nr VS 17
 .sp 1
 .nr PS 14
 .nr VS 17


@@ -248,8 +248,6 @@ List of Documents   inside back cover
 .if o .bp
 \&
 .bp
 .if o .bp
 \&
 .bp

-.OF '''\s10- % -\s0'
-.EF '\s10- % -\s0'''

 .\"
 .\" The contributor list below is derived from the file that resides in
 .\" vangogh:~admin/contrib/contrib:
 .\"
 .\" The contributor list below is derived from the file that resides in
 .\" vangogh:~admin/contrib/contrib:


@@ -262,10 +260,12 @@ List of Documents inside back cover
 .\"
 \&
 .sp |1i
 .\"
 \&
 .sp |1i

-.ps 16
-.ce
-\fBThe Computer Systems Research Group 1979 \- 1993\fP
-.sp 3
+.ps 24
+.vs 27
+.ce 2
+\fBThe Computer Systems Research Group
+1979 \- 1993\fP
+.sp 1.5

 .nr PS 11
 .nr VS 12
 .LP
 .nr PS 11
 .nr VS 12
 .LP


@@ -321,6 +321,8 @@ The Open Software Foundation
 UUNET Technologies Inc.
 .in -1.5i
 .fi
 UUNET Technologies Inc.
 .in -1.5i
 .fi

+.OH '\s10CSRG, 1979 \- 1993''- % -\s0'
+.EH '\s10- % -''CSRG, 1979 \- 1993\s0'

 .bp
 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 11
 .bp
 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 11


@@ -522,7 +524,11 @@ lock(1)    Bob Toxen
 .\"
 .if o .bp
 \&
 .\"
 .if o .bp
 \&

+.EH ''''
+.OH ''''

 .bp
 .bp

+.OH '\s10Preface''- % -\s0'
+.EH '\s10- % -''Preface\s0'

 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 12
 \&
 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 12
 \&


@@ -532,7 +538,7 @@ delim $$
 .EN
 .LP
 .ce
 .EN
 .LP
 .ce

-\fB\s+4PREFACE\s-4\fP
+\fB\s24Preface\s0\fP

 .sp 3
 .NH 1
 Introduction
 .sp 3
 .NH 1
 Introduction


@@ -974,7 +980,7 @@ contributed greatly to this distribution, providing
 valuable advise and guidance.  Helge Skrivervik
 worked on the device drivers which enabled
 the distribution to be delivered with a TU58
 valuable advise and guidance.  Helge Skrivervik
 worked on the device drivers which enabled
 the distribution to be delivered with a TU58

-console cassette and RX01 console flopppy disk, and
+console cassette and RX01 console floppy disk, and

 rewrote major portions of the standalone i/o system
 to support formatting of non-DEC peripherals.
 .LP
 rewrote major portions of the standalone i/o system
 to support formatting of non-DEC peripherals.
 .LP


@@ -1013,7 +1019,7 @@ fixes and other enhancements which are reflected in the system.  We
 are grateful to the UNIX user community for encouragement and
 support.
 .LP
 are grateful to the UNIX user community for encouragement and
 support.
 .LP

-The financial support of the Defence Advanced Research Projects Agency
+The financial support of the Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency

 in support of this work is gratefully acknowledged.
 .sp 1
 .in 4i
 in support of this work is gratefully acknowledged.
 .sp 1
 .in 4i


@@ -1109,7 +1115,7 @@ computing facility, and to our department as a whole.
 .in 4i
 .nf
 W. N. Joy
 .in 4i
 .nf
 W. N. Joy

-\v'-3p'\h'2p'\*:\v'3p'\h'-2p'O. Babao\*~glu
+O\h'-.54m'\v'-.24m'\z\(..\v'.24m'\h'.54m'. Babao\o'~g'lu

 R. S. Fabry
 K. Sklower
 .fi
 R. S. Fabry
 K. Sklower
 .fi


@@ -1142,7 +1148,7 @@ for their advice and support.
 .in 4i
 W. N. Joy
 .br
 .in 4i
 W. N. Joy
 .br

-\v'-3p'\h'2p'\*:\v'3p'\h'-2p'O. Babao\*~glu
+O\h'-.54m'\v'-.24m'\z\(..\v'.24m'\h'.54m'. Babao\o'~g'lu

 .in 0
 .sp 3
 .ne 1i
 .in 0
 .sp 3
 .ne 1i


@@ -1217,7 +1223,11 @@ M. D. McIlroy
 .in 0
 .if o .bp
 \&
 .in 0
 .if o .bp
 \&

+.EH ''''
+.OH ''''

 .bp
 .bp

+.OH '\s10Introduction''- % -\s0'
+.EH '\s10- % -''Introduction\s0'

 .de IR
 \fI\\$1\^\fR\\$2
 ..
 .de IR
 \fI\\$1\^\fR\\$2
 ..


@@ -1225,8 +1235,8 @@ M. D. McIlroy
 \fR\\$1\fI\\$2\^\fR\\$3
 ..
 .ce
 \fR\\$1\fI\\$2\^\fR\\$3
 ..
 .ce

-\fB\s+4INTRODUCTION\s-4\fP
-.sp 1
+\fB\s24Introduction\s0\fP
+.sp 2

 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 12
 .LP
 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 12
 .LP


@@ -1433,9 +1443,9 @@ subsection gives known bugs and sometimes deficiencies.
 Occasionally the suggested fix is also described.
 .LP
 .RE
 Occasionally the suggested fix is also described.
 .LP
 .RE

-At the beginning of URM is a table of contents,
-organized by section and alphabetically within each section.
-There is also a permuted index derived from the table of contents.
+At the beginning of URM, PRM, and SSM is a List of Manual Pages,
+organized by section and alphabetically within each section, and a
+Permuted Index derived from that List.

 Within each index entry, the title of the writeup to which
 it refers is followed by the appropriate section number in parentheses.
 This fact is important because there is considerable
 Within each index entry, the title of the writeup to which
 it refers is followed by the appropriate section number in parentheses.
 This fact is important because there is considerable


@@ -1893,18 +1903,20 @@ contributed from the Free Software Foundation and is
 clearly identified).
 .LP
 Good luck and enjoy BSD.
 clearly identified).
 .LP
 Good luck and enjoy BSD.

-.OH '''\s10- % -\s0'
-.EH '\s10- % -\s0'''

 .if o .bp
 \&
 .if o .bp
 \&

+.EH ''''
+.OH ''''

 .bp
 .bp

-.EF '\s9\\\\*(Dt''\\\\*(Ed\s0'
-.OF '\s9\\\\*(Ed''\\\\*(Dt\s0'
+.OH '\s10Manual Pages''- % -\s0'
+.EH '\s10- % -''Manual Pages\s0'
+.EF '\s10\\\\*(Dt''\\\\*(Ed\s0'
+.OF '\s10\\\\*(Ed''\\\\*(Dt\s0'

 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 11.5
 .LP
 .ce
 .nr PS 10
 .nr VS 11.5
 .LP
 .ce

-\s+4\fBLIST \|OF \|MANUAL \|PAGES\fP\s-4
+\s24\fBList \|of \|Manual \|Pages\fP\s0

 .nr x 0.5
 .in +\nxi
 .nf
 .nr x 0.5
 .in +\nxi
 .nf


@@ -1939,15 +1951,17 @@ Good luck and enjoy BSD.
 .ta .5i 1i 1.5i 2i 2.5i 3i 3.5i 4i 4.5i 5i 5.5i 6i 6.5i
 .if o .bp
 \&
 .ta .5i 1i 1.5i 2i 2.5i 3i 3.5i 4i 4.5i 5i 5.5i 6i 6.5i
 .if o .bp
 \&

+.EH ''''
+.OH ''''

 .bp
 \&
 .bp
 \&

-.OH '\s9\fIPermuted Index\fP''- % -\s0'
-.EH '\s9- % -''\fIPermuted Index\fP\s0'
+.OH '\s10Permuted Index''- % -\s0'
+.EH '\s10- % -''Permuted Index\s0'

 .ds Ed 4.4BSD
 .ds Ed 4.4BSD

-.ds Dt June \|1993
+.ds Dt April \|1994

 .ce
 .ce

-\s+4\fBPERMUTED \|INDEX\fP\s-4
-.sp 1
+\s24\fBPermuted \|Index\fP\s0
+.sp 2

 .nr PS 8
 .nr VS 9
 .LP
 .nr PS 8
 .nr VS 9
 .LP