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SCCS-vsn: lib/libc/compat-43/creat.2 6.3
SCCS-vsn: lib/libc/sys/dup.2 6.2
SCCS-vsn: lib/libc/sys/execve.2 6.3

diff --git a/usr/src/lib/libc/compat-43/creat.2 b/usr/src/lib/libc/compat-43/creat.2
index 6ca85c8..32b932a 100644 (file)
--- a/usr/src/lib/libc/compat-43/creat.2
+++ b/usr/src/lib/libc/compat-43/creat.2
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 .\" All rights reserved.  The Berkeley software License Agreement
 .\" specifies the terms and conditions for redistribution.
 .\"
 .\" All rights reserved.  The Berkeley software License Agreement
 .\" specifies the terms and conditions for redistribution.
 .\"

-.\"    @(#)creat.2     6.2 (Berkeley) %G%
+.\"    @(#)creat.2     6.3 (Berkeley) %G%

 .\"
 .TH CREAT 2 ""
 .UC 4
 .\"
 .TH CREAT 2 ""
 .UC 4


@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ mode, or
 facilitity.
 .SH "RETURN VALUE
 The value \-1 is returned if an error occurs.  Otherwise,
 facilitity.
 .SH "RETURN VALUE
 The value \-1 is returned if an error occurs.  Otherwise,

-the call returns a non-negative descriptor which only permits
+the call returns a non-negative descriptor that only permits

 writing.
 .SH ERRORS
 .I Creat
 writing.
 .SH ERRORS
 .I Creat

diff --git a/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/dup.2 b/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/dup.2
index ad116b6..12a725f 100644 (file)
--- a/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/dup.2
+++ b/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/dup.2
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 .\" All rights reserved.  The Berkeley software License Agreement
 .\" specifies the terms and conditions for redistribution.
 .\"
 .\" All rights reserved.  The Berkeley software License Agreement
 .\" specifies the terms and conditions for redistribution.
 .\"

-.\"    @(#)dup.2       6.1 (Berkeley) %G%
+.\"    @(#)dup.2       6.2 (Berkeley) %G%

 .\"
 .TH DUP 2 ""
 .UC 4
 .\"
 .TH DUP 2 ""
 .UC 4


@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ The argument \fIoldd\fP is a small non-negative integer index in
 the per-process descriptor table.  The value must be less
 than the size of the table, which is returned by
 .IR getdtablesize (2).
 the per-process descriptor table.  The value must be less
 than the size of the table, which is returned by
 .IR getdtablesize (2).

-The new descriptor
-.I newd
-returned by the call is the lowest numbered descriptor which is
+The new descriptor returned by the call,
+.I newd,
+is the lowest numbered descriptor that is

 not currently in use by the process.
 .PP
 The object referenced by the descriptor does not distinguish
 not currently in use by the process.
 .PP
 The object referenced by the descriptor does not distinguish

diff --git a/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/execve.2 b/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/execve.2
index 21d9036..f78549e 100644 (file)
--- a/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/execve.2
+++ b/usr/src/lib/libc/sys/execve.2
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 .\" All rights reserved.  The Berkeley software License Agreement
 .\" specifies the terms and conditions for redistribution.
 .\"
 .\" All rights reserved.  The Berkeley software License Agreement
 .\" specifies the terms and conditions for redistribution.
 .\"

-.\"    @(#)execve.2    6.2 (Berkeley) %G%
+.\"    @(#)execve.2    6.3 (Berkeley) %G%

 .\"
 .TH EXECVE 2 ""
 .UC 4
 .\"
 .TH EXECVE 2 ""
 .UC 4


@@ -47,14 +47,14 @@ the name of the executed program (i.e. the last component of \fIname\fP).
 .PP
 The argument \fIenvp\fP is also an array of character pointers
 to null-terminated strings.  These strings pass information to the
 .PP
 The argument \fIenvp\fP is also an array of character pointers
 to null-terminated strings.  These strings pass information to the

-new process which are not directly arguments to the command, see
+new process that is not directly an argument to the command, see

 .IR environ (7).
 .PP
 Descriptors open in the calling process remain open in
 the new process, except for those for which the close-on-exec
 flag is set; see
 .IR close (2).
 .IR environ (7).
 .PP
 Descriptors open in the calling process remain open in
 the new process, except for those for which the close-on-exec
 flag is set; see
 .IR close (2).

-Descriptors which remain open are unaffected by
+Descriptors that remain open are unaffected by

 .IR execve .
 .PP
 Ignored signals remain ignored across an
 .IR execve .
 .PP
 Ignored signals remain ignored across an